thinking that I’m free
let my soul fly unfettered
from thoughts chaining me
Thinking that I’m free let my soul fly unfettered.
Let my soul fly unfettered from thoughts chaining me.
thinking that I’m free
let my soul fly unfettered
from thoughts chaining me
Thinking that I’m free let my soul fly unfettered.
Let my soul fly unfettered from thoughts chaining me.
Quite nice!!!
Thanks 🙂
Hello! Beautiful haiku!
Thanks! glad you liked it 🙂
It all depends on inflection. Clever twist.
Thank you!
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I like this.
Thank you!
very nice haiku… 🙂
Thank you!
hey i’ve posted a poem i had written back in 2013 which probably falls in line with the thought in your hiaku. give it a read.
nd! ur haiku has a beautiful expression! gud job.
Thank you! will definitely read your poem.